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Wednesday, December 29, 2010

Mind full of residence (1)

part one:

the retentive mind as dis-ease

The disease of a retentive mind

is a process disease.

It is a dis-ease of itself

that comes from intentional efforts

and therefore results in a style

that retentive mind comes to accept

as standard stressful process.

It requires an indelible memory.

It asks for observational skills

in full operation.

It functions

just short of a nostalgic memory

and can respond to recall efforts

on demand.

Besides all the visual input

dedicated to memory,

there are these inner voices

that assert side comments

and notational quips,

addressing peripheral events

with immediacy

in a sort of internal code.

Of course,

there is the failsafe storage

of facts from conditioning

of all kinds

and a veritable tool chest

of common sense responses

stockpiled for imminent reactive usage.

Along with this repertoire

of appropriately clipped answers

to short term memory

in recall situations among friends,

there are the fatal flaws

featured by recognition;

quick observation and surmise,

interpretation towards immediacy

and certitude

as subsequently being the first

to verbally response,

the words and phrases of summary,

the monotone of thoroughness,

the cadence of finality,

the delivery of a final say,

the short fall of dismissed deduction,

the gloss of curiosity

wasted on cynical discharge,

the resounding bellow

that measures for the space

of an ear shot distance

and the surveying glance

to meet all the potential eyes

who have been verbally addressed

and the final stamp

of recognition’s approval

which is the triumphant rant

as consensually celebrated approval

by the grand collective applause

of silence from everyone

in situational attendance.

After all,

recognition is

from its onset to its final cord,

a conclusion process

and the retentive mind is home

to many assumptions and

hidden agendas carried forward

as baggage for life

and the makings and fixings

that go unnoticed

until they appear as disease

and surprisingly so.

Each of us is so absently creative

beyond the call

yet bound by these effects

and then to discover . . .

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