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Friday, September 18, 2020

constructive feedback


the constructive feedback of presence

supersedes whatever lip-service can provide

there is no buildup in the mind

for words arranging themselves into deliverance

there is no great eye to eye staging going on

one does not have to come into a posture secured

the melody is loud and also silent

it can be heard as felt

it's quicker then cognition 

but more direct than understanding can provide

the ambience is overwhelming 

but camouflaged in its deliverance

for looking won't see it

but the feel permeates the field

everything else about presentation is accessories

in the end, what is heard is self-talk

resulting from the impression made

what one says to oneself

after the presence of another is absorbed

is the constructive feedback of another's presence . . .

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